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Oh! I thought you said he was the ugliest! D:

Posted by superficial on Mar 13, 08 12:26 am

I do think he's cute
He's the cutest one in the band in my opinion

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 13, 08 12:24 am

Your welcome! (: And how can you think Aaron Yan is not cute?! T_T

Posted by superficial on Mar 13, 08 12:20 am

Haha thanks

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 13, 08 12:17 am

Hahah that's so awesome!! :D. You're good at writing fanfics ;].

Posted by superficial on Mar 13, 08 12:13 am

Haha yeah thanks I'm gonna look at it tomorrow cuz i have to get off soon cuz i wont get up in the mornin if i dont xD but heres the second part

The train screeched to a stop as passengers got on and off.
"Saranghaeyo," sobbed Tiffany as she hugged Donghae tightly.
"Awww, Tiff, you don't have to cry....it's not like I'll be gone forever..." said Donghae as he stroked her soft hair.
"I know, I know...but I'm really going to miss you..." she said as she looked up at Donghae. Donghae gently kissed her lips, putting a small smile on her face.
"Tiff," said Donghae as he pulled out a small velvet box from his pocket, "Will you marry me?"
Tiffany gasped and tears began to fill her eyes. She nodded and she quickly wiped them away. Donghae slid the small ring on her slender finger and hugged her.
"When I get back we are going to have a proper wedding!" said Donghae, "but until then, you are my wife, Mrs. Lee! I'm going to brag to all my soldier friends about my gorgeous wife at home!"
Tiffany giggled, "And I'll brag about my handsome husband in the army."
"Deal," said Donghae as he planted another kiss on her lips.
"LAST CALL FOR THE TRAIN!" boomed the speakers.
Tiffany's eyes started to water again as Donghae let go. Her eyes pleaded with him not to go but she knew that he had to.
"Promise me that you will come back safe," said Tiffany as she held out her pinky.
Donghae laughed at her childness, "Promise me that you'll always wait for me...." Donghae took a look around, "By that bench!" he pointed to a brightly coloured, pink bench, that was to the right of the train station's ice cream shop. Tiffany giggled.
Donghae then extended his pinky and linked it with Tiffany's.
"I promise," they both said as they touched thumbs.
Donghae picked up his luggage and hopped on to the train. He gave his bags to the luggage boy and waved at Tiffany just as the train started.
"Saranghaeyo!" he shouted over the roar of the train.
"Saranghaeyo!" Tiffany cried as she smiled through her tears.
Then she watched as the train disappeared into the distance.
~*~*~*~
~*~Tiffany 's POV~*~
It had been 41 years.
41 years, since I've last seen you. Everyday, every single day, I've waited by the pink bench, whose colours have faded to almost a light brown. The ice cream shop went out of business and closed down quite awhile ago. The train station is deserted, except for the little animals who come to look for food.
Even I, myself, has become faded out and lined with wrinkles.
But, I promised you, that I would wait, and I never go back on my word.
I leaned back into the old bench, waiting for the train to come. A light breeze came and lifted a small peice of paper from my pocket. I hesitated before finally deciding to let it go. I watched it dance in the breeze as it floated away. I stood up and brushed out the wrinkles in my skirt.
"Maybe tomorrow," I said gently as I took a finally look at the station. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. Then I turned around and began my walk home.
~*~*~*~
The delicate paper fluttered through the sky. The pen had faded away but a note was still readable on the fragile parchment.
Dear Mrs. Lee,
We are sad to inform you, but your beloved husband, Lee Donghae, has been killed by an enemy soldier. He was one of our best recruited and will be missed dearly.
--Lieutenant General
~*~*~*~
Lee Donghae, an eternity will pass, but an eternity I will wait.....

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 13, 08 12:02 am

AWW THAT'S SO CUTE HAHAH. :). It's so dramatic. xD.

I sent you the link to the songs btw! =]

Posted by superficial on Mar 13, 08 12:00 am

thats the first part of it i'll give u the second in a bit

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:52 pm

Donghae held the announcement firmly in his hands as Tiffany sat on the couch, close to tears.
"It's okay Tiff," comforted Donghae as he gave her a hug.
"But I don't want you to go," she said quietly as she looked away.
"But I need to get stronger so I can protect my little Tiffany!" said Donghae, trying to make Tiffany smile by flexing his muscles.
She let out a soft giggle.
"How long do you have until they take you away?"
"For the last time, it's not taking me away, it's just time for me to serve the country," explained Donghae. Tiffany stared hard at Donghae and then let out a frustrated sigh.
"'Fine'. How long until it's time to 'serve the country'?" she asked again as she rolled her eyes.
"Yah," said Donghae gently as he flicked her forehead.
"Ow~," pouted Tiffany as she turned away from him.
"Awww, Tiffany, don't be like this~," said Donghae as he copied her pout. Then he wrapped his arms around her and gave her a tight hug. Tiffany squirmed at his touch and stiffed her giggle. Donghae placed his head on her shoulder as kissed her softly on the cheek. Tiffany smiled but then let out a deep sigh.
"Just a bit over a day, am I right?"
Donghae pursed his lips and nodded gently.
"Oh, Donghae...." said Tiffany as she burst into tears and clutched on to him.

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:52 pm

Haha ok hold on a second

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:43 pm

Let me read the fanfic of DongHae! xD

Posted by superficial on Mar 12, 08 11:37 pm

Haha ok I'll try

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:34 pm

Make a fanfic about YunJaeSu!! :]

Posted by superficial on Mar 12, 08 11:26 pm

Lol yeah thats what she said when i told her that I killed him she was like "WHAT?!?!?!?!? HOW COULD YOU DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT!?!?!?!?!" Haha it was funny. Ohhh ok that would be good =]

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:20 pm

LMFAO. You killed DongHae?! :( But he so sexy. :(. I'm uploading the KAT-TUN songs onto my mediafire account, so if you want, I'll send you the link to the songs via PM. ;).

Posted by superficial on Mar 12, 08 11:18 pm

lol ok i'll have to listen sometime

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:15 pm

Yeah him my friend is in love with him so she told me to write a story with him in it but she was being mean to me earlier so he died

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:15 pm

And yes, KAT-TUN is awesome. :)

Posted by superficial on Mar 12, 08 11:14 pm

DongHae?! The one from SuJu? (:

Posted by superficial on Mar 12, 08 11:14 pm

Umm it's like a fanfic it's of Donghae

Posted by xXBuDeBuAiXx on Mar 12, 08 11:08 pm